Great job. i enjoyed it. keep it up.

The poem itself I would have given a 4/5, but when I read the last stanza, I felt it had to go up to 5/5...which I gave. They poem had a good flow, and a great use of wording. Obviously, my favorite stanza was the closing one. It was perfect in my opinion. It seemed so wise.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'The Mask'. You know, I wrote that poem almost a year ago, and yet my life is exactly the same.