Good idea you're trying to get across. I really liked the message, and how straight forward it was. 5/5

This poem is really good!

"Your friends are here for you.
Even though you push them away.
Just give them a chance to help.
No one can do everything on there
own, it is just impossible to do so."

I really like that part cause it is true that no one can do everything on there own. It is impossible!! 5/5

~Shae

A great message behind this beautiful poem.

Good poem i like the feeling in it the context needs a little work but other then that it was awesome

Boy is this true. Wish I woulda known it a year ago, eh. Good poem, keep it up. :D

That was well penned, excellent flow, and flawless word choice. great job. 5/5