Comments : Beginning

  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    Gorgous!!
    I can relate 100%
    5/5
    xoxo-am

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Great poem, it was so sweet!!

    Two broken hearts
    Together as one
    It feels like forever
    But it's really just begun

    That last stanza was great i really liked it. You have a lot of talent, keep it up and i look forward to readin more of your work :]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, I love you poems. You are a wonderful writter, keep up the amazing work. I am sure a lot of people can relate to this poem.

    Peace, Joe