So this is how love feels...

by PoetryHeart   Dec 20, 2006


First time I saw you
was when i knew
it was like Love

Your brown eyes
were enough to make me die
it was like Love

You were so smart
wouldnt be surprised if you could look into my heart
it was like Love

it couldnt be described
just how much i liked you inside
it was like Love

just the way I felt inside
was enough to make me realize
It Was Love

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the repetition of the last line of each stanza, it really got the point across of what love can be like.
    Excellent poem
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I dont think this is bad, maybe it's a little simple but u shouldn't hate it. i actually think the simplicity of it is effective b/c it seems like it was that simple u realised u loved someone, just keep workin on ur poems, if u need ne help/advice, i'm here!!

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Really, bad. not my best work. i actually hate it. no need to comment.

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