by PoetryHeart
Really, bad. not my best work. i actually hate it. no need to comment. |
by Espoirfailed
I dont think this is bad, maybe it's a little simple but u shouldn't hate it. i actually think the simplicity of it is effective b/c it seems like it was that simple u realised u loved someone, just keep workin on ur poems, if u need ne help/advice, i'm here!! |
by Gem
I loved the repetition of the last line of each stanza, it really got the point across of what love can be like. |