by Hannah Emellia Dec 20, 2006
category :
Special events /
christmas
See the fire? |
This poem was fairly good. What I mean was, that it was a nice read, but it was nothing special in my novice opinion. One thing though, I think you shouldn't have had 'Where are you?' in the second stanza because it disturbs the structure. Anyway, MERRY CHRISTMAS AND I HOPE YOU HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR. |