Enlightened Darkness

by Tammie   Dec 20, 2006


Her beauty shines like the summer sun
Her presence captivating to all
A good, honest, genuine person
No one suspected her sudden fall

Such a bubbly personality
Her smile brightens a stranger's day
Little do they know what lies behind
A shocking truth, at the least to say

Its' her eyes that get the attention
Sparkling blue just like the ocean
Tears quietly hidden behind them
Veiling her very sad emotions

This is the sad story of a girl
Who just couldn't take life any more
She felt depressed and suicidal
Fake smiles is all people ever saw

One day, someone special came along
Caught her eye and swept her off her feet
She knew how very lucky she was
For this amazing man she could meet

He bought her out of that once dark life
Gave her happiness, also some light
Just because of this one special man
Her life quickly changed for dark to bright

When all is lost in the dark of life
Giving up is not the way to go
Hold on to hope and wait for the light
This of this story, and what it shows.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Poeta

    Wow, that was so inspirational! Love the surprise twist at the end-happy ending, yay! ^.^
    It was such a beautiful poem, thank you for sharing your talents! Simply brilliant!!

    Heartz!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very inspirational, my favourite kind of poem, full of hope and truth.
    you are a wonderful writer, keep it up,
    much love, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was sweet & inspirational.
    I agree with the message in that you have got to keep hope in your world at all times.
    Great flow and your choice of wording was simply beautiful. You've got a lot of talent as a writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job! The message here is avery good one. There is always hope. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I couldn't agree more with the message in your poem. Never give up on hope, something will come along one day that will forever make you happy. Excellent job 5/5