The depths you have reached when describing the action of losing yourself, was so powerful and heartwrenching. This is a trully a very sad write. One that is felt by many.

Great job.
Jeannie

Really a nice poem, i loved it, it can be so true... wonderful job again 5/5

5/5. This one is much much better. I know where your coming from. Keep up the writing. Your very good at it.