This poem is really beautiful and heart breaking. Perfect in every way, great meaning, flow and rhyme. 5/5

This is one of the most amazing poems you have ever written. The flow and rhyme were right on, the message was amazing, and your word choice was just outstanding. I think this is a new favorite poem of mine. If I could give it a 10 I would!
So 5+5 LOL
Charisma*!!!!!!!

Awesome poem!! very sad!! thanx for letting me read it... much love

Amazing poem..
You kept up a steady rhythm which make it all the more enjoyable to read..
Excellent piece, i loved the subject
5/5
*Gem*

Comment #2:
Man! That was amazing! Again, your imagry is just incredible! I absolutely love how you can take someone with you through your thought process. Great job!
~Midnight Sun