Comment #6

"I don't really know what's written in my future
I don't really care how things will be"

An excellent start, it immediantly captures the readers attention and the rest of the poem keeps it.
I found a very powerful message in this piece but it could just be me =)
5/5
*Gem*

The firstl ine really set the tone and it was a real good metaphor to open you poem.

xxx alex xxx

I know what ur meaning I know how t is to just not really care lol ^^

Wow this simply amazed me. THe words you utilized made the poem flow in such a way i wanted to cry.Half the time i need a dictionary to help me comprehend.But understand what your going through anhd in my past i went through it and i think i'm gonna again. .. Sorry i thought to make my comment on your poem another poem but i dont think words could express how beautiful your poem is.
Could you comment on mine
called living life in amoment not the past..
l``Jo Anna El