by debbylyn Dec 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
One |
by Barry
What to say? again just lost for words!! |
by Liz
You know, I tried this once...it didn't work out quite so well. Heh. This was an amazing write. I love the whole idea of it. I doubt I could pull something off like this. Lol. And my brother said it was "sick". Which is really good. Haha. Never stop writing!! Take care!! Love, |
This is really good. I love the way you ended with the word "One". It really emphasizes the desolation in this poem. Great work. |
Nice shape of poem... |
by Rose Noble
It's nice and beautiful. Just not at the top of my favorites. I'm sorry. |