Wow, is this your first poem??
It's excellent, a far cry from most first attempts on this sites.
Excellently written with some powerful language that really portrays the emotion in the words..
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

Thank you for the compliment. Just letting my feelings come out... i am just venting... thank you again, RON

Very nice flow.. and very good emotion. This was the best by far. Nice work. 4.8/5

Its interesting how you transitioned from one tone to another. She's evil, but you decide to save her.. surely not all women are that way? haha

This was really a god piece. the rhyme, the flow, and the word choice all worked well together. Excellent!