Let me feel you

by nicola   Dec 20, 2006


Shower me in raindrops
from top to toe
make me feel you
understand i want nothing
and ask for less
it is merely
to put my mind at rest
strike me down
where i stand
let me feel you
torment my soul
with your guided rules
tell where you be
away from those
that need you
scream into my heart
maybe just a little
so that i may feel you
truth be told
i live in sin
floating
through clouds of emotions
help me to know
which way to go
have i done wrong
am i being punished
will you let me taste heaven
then feed me straight to hell
i wonder
will i ever feel you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "floating
    through clouds of emotions
    help me to know
    which way to go"

    Beautiful words.
    The overall poem had a bittersweet tone to it which gave off a nice effect.
    Well done on this piece
    5/5
    *gem*