That poem reminds me of some of the times i took LSD. but anyway the rhyme was good and i quite liked it

What is LSD?

This poem was beautiful hun thanks for your comment on my poem "Mother of all" I enjoy your point of view on it.

Briddy,
Great job on this poem. Ireally enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work. Take Care Cindy

Wow. i loved your detailing again! again, it really painted this picture. i could like picture everything you wrote in my head. it was really amazing. i dont know what else to say except keep up the amazing work:) 5/5