Couldn't Ask For More

by BeautifulxMess   Dec 20, 2006


He's my living proof,
and the reason I breath.
He keeps me holding on,
and steady on my feet.

He's the angel of mine
that keeps me secure.
He's my shooting star,
and his love will endure.

He's my everything,
and nothing less.
I pursue his soft touch,
and I nap upon his chest.

He has eyes to look in,
and lips to endow a kiss.
His heart skips a beat
when I put him in a bliss.

He's the answer to my prayer,
and the wish I made.
He's the reason I'm living,
and our love will never fade.

He's what I've wanted,
and what I've ask for.
He's what I've cast about,
and I couldn't ask for more.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwwh, I thought this was really sweet.
    I thought you did a good job on this, the wording and imagery used were good and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    This poem makes me smile! I love it. I've heard that there is nothing better than being in love. I can't ever say I have been in love though!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    The whole poem was very good, i really liked the last line, well done!!!!!! :) xoxoxoxoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Flowed very well, and really good rhyming. It was sweet. It didn't really jump out at me, like, 'Wow, that was BRILLIANT', but it was a good try.

    I enjoyed reading. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good! I loved the first and last stanza of the poem. The flow was really good also 5/5

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