Comments : Couldn't Ask For More

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A perfect romantic poem, and it is so true as a love of a person does change they way we feel or act. great job

    the only thing i observe was in the last stanza,first line
    "he is what i have wanted"
    you typed it as "he is want i have wanted"

    once again, great poem with a 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good! I loved the first and last stanza of the poem. The flow was really good also 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Flowed very well, and really good rhyming. It was sweet. It didn't really jump out at me, like, 'Wow, that was BRILLIANT', but it was a good try.

    I enjoyed reading. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    The whole poem was very good, i really liked the last line, well done!!!!!! :) xoxoxoxoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    This poem makes me smile! I love it. I've heard that there is nothing better than being in love. I can't ever say I have been in love though!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwwh, I thought this was really sweet.
    I thought you did a good job on this, the wording and imagery used were good and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and flow.