Amazingly Written unles u marked mine badly then terrible! I Joke I Joke Your Amazing with words this poem puled at tugged to my inner core and my inner being.

Oh, another great poem by you, very well written. but it is sad.

keep up the great work like always, you are one of my favorites in the site.

Love this, felt the sam eway before...that's reason for one of my poems...keep up the good owrk, mayb comment on one of my poems sometime?

Good poem!!! I agree with Jess. It had such a strong sence of emotion and the flow was great! 5/5

~Shae

That is AMAZINGLY GOOD!!! It's one of the best poems I've read in a very long time, I love it!!!!! oxoxoxoxoxoxo

So many sad poems ;_:. But, once again, another good one. Keep up the good work - sad or not :).

The temptation to tear.

That was deep and reallllllllllllyyyy gooodddd. 5/5.

Trully a sad write. Felt the emotional pull of each word... each stanza.

Word choice was good and the flow was well executed.

Overall, good job.

Jeannie

Wow. This one still amazes me.. Lol. I've read it so many times. I'm really glad you entered this into my contest. I enjoyed it very much. This is deffinitley another one of my favorites from you. Absolutley perfect.

My favorite lines were:

Then he pushed her,
on that Cold December night,
Took it too far.

Then she crumbled..
Because of him she crumbled.

And now the flower's wilted.
No longer a beauty.
The colors have now faded.
She's gone.

^^ AMAZING! They were reallly good! I can relate to this.. Perfectly written. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x 5.5