Wow pretty intense. Lots of anger there, wicked write.

Kelly
xx

I ove this poem..this is like one of my favorites. Keep doing great, I love all of your poems.
-Koi =)

This is soo sad.. i really hope its not true.. anyway i really like it.. it wasnt going where i expected... i love how in the end you want to die not to just be rid of the pain but so you dont have to lies to friends its a really great end..

Aww this is so sad. I loved this poem along with al your other poems. You definately know how to write.5/5 keep up the good work

You are a talented writer.. as just so you know I hope you never stop writing!! And I love it.. you're so deep into a poem.. it feel realistic. i love that.. good job 5/5

Hope its not from experience , as it is so realistic, another great poem

Wow... This was really intense and sad...But I loved reading it...I just hope it's not real...But I give this a 5/5 because of the rhythm and the flow was wonderful...keep on writing and be strong... ^_^

Wow
sorry but it is all that i can say
wow
:~)Sam

Great poem! The flow was amazing, the concept was so deep, and the way it was written worked so well! Truly one of the best poems I've read... Simply because of the emotion you've shown! 5/5

One word. Amazing. I read this like ten times because it's so good.

P.S - I really hope this isn't happening to you. If it is feel free to talk to me.

<3 Bethany

I like this one, I am glad I picked it. Very dark and deep, such sadness behind it. I really like the title as well and the way you used it through the poem. You did a good job with this piece. Nice work.