by Sandra D Dec 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Just let me go |
Wow, I thought that was a GREAT poem.. I can totally relate to what you're feeling.. I gave it a 5/5.. |
EWWW is this about Marissa HATE HER. Sandra don't even compare urself with her. she's not worthy!!! |
Good poem.. you kind of go from tought to thought a little randomly but still its good |
by Rocky
That wasnt that bad of a poem. the thoughts jumped around a bit but never-the-less quite good |
I liked the end of this, it was very powerful. As for the rest of the poem, I didn't like it as much, it just seemed like a big jumble of thoughts that was hard to follow. I did like the emotion though. |