I totally get what you're saying! You are really very good! Thank you again for commenting...means so much to me! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Nice job, work on your wording, but you have a good talent here, good things working for ya... great job!

I liked this because there was so much emotion in it.
I also thought it was sweet.

Omg! i love it.i can really relate to this poem..i loved a guy so much but he never acted like he cared.so i told him i was finally going to try to move on.it was just breaking my heart the way he treated me and then he told me how much he loved me.and he said he always would...so i understand what ur talking about...its hard..but yea excellent poem..5/5

This is like a love-hate poem. Boyfriend .. ex .. drama. Hate it! I really think you shoulda rhymed it.. but its alright without. You did a great job. Good flow.. And a lot of emotion.

Excellent Job Babe

5/5

What a sad love story. I would change tweak the last line to read:
"And no, it's not with you" . Other than that, nice job.

The saying is true "Don't know what you've got until it's gone."

Thanx! i fixed it...

I really like this, situations like these seem to be everywhere, and I think it's a great interpertation.

I liked the end of this, it was very powerful. As for the rest of the poem, I didn't like it as much, it just seemed like a big jumble of thoughts that was hard to follow. I did like the emotion though.

--Steph

Ps. I think there is a mistake here:

"You said it makes you jealous"

That wasnt that bad of a poem. the thoughts jumped around a bit but never-the-less quite good

Good poem.. you kind of go from tought to thought a little randomly but still its good

EWWW is this about Marissa HATE HER. Sandra don't even compare urself with her. she's not worthy!!!

Wow, I thought that was a GREAT poem.. I can totally relate to what you're feeling.. I gave it a 5/5..