Wow, wow wow....that was so amamzing, I loved it. I don't know what to say, it all flowed. wow that was awesoe!! GOOSEBUMPS!! wow, keep it up!!

you're friend:)
alissa

Wow! The ending was unexpected. I usually don't get into poetry that doesn't rhyme, but this one, it was so good! The haunt feeling touches the readers fingertips. Stunning! 5/5
Nice work!

-Brit