This is very good david, loved the flow, sweet poem, 5/5!!!!

Aww thats sweet..i love ur work as always and im so glad to see u hapy bud. if u can do me a small favor and comment as many of my poems as u can and tell ur friends to check out my stuff thatd be great!! again grat job, congradulations. also as my friendi guess i can mention my bf and i are getting engaged sumtime befiore june im not sure when hes asking me but its good to see sumone else happy. keep up the great poetry..exoperiment wit styles :)

lissa