This is my 5 poemi ve written.
As you can tell all the poems I write are love poems.And written for one person.The love of my life.
I wrote this one a few days after he told me he has always wanted a girl to call him their hero.Im going to work on it a bit more,,change some things.and give it to him for christmas.:0
Please tell me if i should change anything and how you liked it. Yo ucan say whatever you want.
Thanks guys.

This is a really interesting poem. This is how I feel about the love of my life, though we're apart at this time...
I'm sorry it took me so long to comment back. I hope you don't mind so critizism from poet to poet. This is a good piece of work, but you should go through & reread this. You have a few grammatical errors. It's really good though. I'm not going to vote, because I don't like voting people down for things they can change.
-Heather