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by End Of Eternity   Dec 21, 2006


Burning lights all around the room
Loud music erasing the concern for tomorrow
Sitting all alone in corner somewhere
Drowning deep inside my own sorrows

Staring at some rabbits leaping like crazy
Screaming just to forget what they hide inside
What difference would such people ever make?
If they don't realize somewhere someone has died

I guess its only me looking for an excuse to be depressed
So addicted now of blaming others, i think i am obsessed
But then this is how circle of life is supposed to rotate
When everybody is falling in love my heart is loving to hate

May be this is the effect of dark room with animals
Or i am just inebriated while having yet another for the road
Who cares as long as i am keeping all this to myself
No one cares to pay attention to a heart brutally gored

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  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    WOW! ur style of writing is almost the same as mine. ur poems are all g8!!! chek mine out 2 if u get da chance...

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    "I guess its only me looking for an excuse to be depressed
    So addicted now of blaming others, i think i am obsessed
    But then this is how circle of life is supposed to rotate
    When everybody is falling in love my heart is loving to hate"
    ___

    This poem was just simply amazing. I love the way you wrote this one. I don't even know what to say. I just love it!! Never stop writing!! =] Take care.

    `Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I love the way you compare the people around to rabbits and animals as you sit and observe. Very deep feelings are expressed so well in this piece. Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Amazing dark poem again! yaar from where do u bring these thoughts in ur mind???????? well good job as usual! no doubt 5/5

    luv

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello My Talented ^.^
    what a sweet penned!!
    I love the 2nd and the 3rd stanzas so much..they're probably the best =)
    a very great poem with so much sadness in it...
    I hope you're feeling refreshed & always be happy =)

    G'luck with the comings
    Luv
    NemO xxxxxxx

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