Unbearable Pain

by melly xx   Dec 21, 2006


I want you to feel
The pain you caused me
You tore my heart out
My hatred is all you can see

You left my soul
shattered pieces on the floor
You left me there to rot
And now I hate you forever more

I want to cause you pain
I need to hear you cry
You'll never know how i feel
Why I want to die

My tears are blood
My whispers; screams
This pain will never stop
My heart is splitting at the seams

© MLS

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is another great poem by you, keep up the great job like always.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very well written poem! love the ay you used your words...
    it was very sad! and deep as well...

    thanks for the comment on my poem... it means alot to me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Another excellent write. Your sadness can be felt in the words you have written. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    Wow! nice poem! loved the imagery!! 5/5!

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