Grown Up

by Raven   Dec 21, 2006


Now that your done with me
I've grown to see.....

Liars are hard to believe
and yet they deceive so well...

We're not that friendly anymore
so there's the door.....

Obivously about a guy who messed with my head until he got what he wanted.... Will thank him for the inspiration though!

Comments are greatly appreciated and will return favor....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I'm not sure why I didn't like it. I really wanted to. I hate saying bad things about people's work, but I feel that no one on this site really tells the truth. Anyway, I think you should have made the lines a little longer. I think the structure was a little uneven, and I think the wording needed a little more strength and depth. Once again, I'm sorry for this comment.

    Brad

    P.S. please let me know what you thought about this comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Freddie

    Lol. nice poem! loved it...although i wudnt hav gotten the message unless u told me tho so u mite wanna try n make that a bit clearer..

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