Wow! Wow! Wow! This was so powerful!!! Really emotional. Another great write! Thanks for the enjoyable read! :)
~Midnight Sun

I'm startin to wish i'd read more of your poems sooner lol
They are all really good!!!
Awww i'm really proud of you =D
And of course i gave it 5/5 =P

The idea of the poem is good, but my friend wrote a poem with the same idea, and it's better than this. Nevertheless, it was enjoyible to read...

Really a heartwrenching yet awakening poem, it's definitely a reality... great job on this 5/5

Well I have to say you are very talented! You have again told of things that need to be brought to ones attetion. Excellent

Your very good expressing yourself. I was thinking as I read your comment on my poem. I almost hated to return to your site because I could feel your pain and I hated thinking it might be true. I wanted to shut my mind off to it and not believe these kinds of things happen to children. I still shudder when I think of your write. My heart and prayers go out to you and other who have walked the same. Keep writting, the world needs to know.

Wow. all of your poetry is amazing and I cannot pick a favorite poem! this one deals with the issues that are around today, and i love how you portrayed every character. once again, it flowed lovely, and i had a little bit of a tune in my head.

5/5

I think I read Dacey's.. you guys' both rocked! I really can't choose which ones stand out, or I really like.. because.. yeah.. but I think this one rhymed and flowed very well:

There's the girl getting raped
Every day by her brother's friend
She pleads with him every day
'Please let this pain end.'

Even though its kinda sick.. but like i said flow and rhyme.. great.

You did a great job at this. :) You have a nack for rhymin.

Excellent

5/5

This is a very dark poem indeed. gee.

5/5. i like the way you set it out. gbgbg i mean girl boy girl boy ect.

david

You are right..this world is totally insane... some times it is so hard to actually have a happy moment any more..but the truth is if you have good true friends to help you through everything life isn't that bad...well other than that great job!

KEEP WRITING!

~SHANNON~

A good piece with a good story/message. I liked the storytelling, and the writing, but I did think that the rhythm did stubble a few times. But overall, and enjoyable piece.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on ever poem that you read.