A lovers Goodbye

by Mark   Dec 21, 2006


In the present i still see
In my mind we would be
All the struggles we have fought
All the luck you had brought

The future is now my fear
Why did you leave my dear??
You will never know, now that you are gone.
That in my heart, you were the only one.

The time we have had
is now memories, and they makes me sad.
And I ain't want to lie.
That without you I want to die.

Cause in the battle between heart and mind.
There is the answer I will find.
But my soul to my body seems to receive.
A message that it wants to leave.

Goodbye to you, the one I loved.
The blades cutting my vanes seems so soft.
Because they were the ones that gave.
Freedom to my soul, in me it was only a slave.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Innocent Danger

    Ex cutter maybe? .... not that im dissen u i am ... if u look on my site i think i might has some poems about that

    Is this like a true poem , cause i know if i was the girl u wrote this about i would see a whole lot of love i wouldnt wanna give up , this is really good and its cool u like to talk about ur feelings not all macho

  • 17 years ago

    by Elvira

    Like i said i LOVE it, it is sad but then again cute keep up the good work dont let it get to u though unless it already did

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Omg! this is so sad....but i enjoyed it.. great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lindsay

    This is really great. I've never been in love so i cannot relate. I love the ending!!! 10/10
    ~Lindsay

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I love it
    AWWW
    i can relate
    but i'm in love so hmf
    _Chelsea*

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