Damn.. so sad.. i actually dropped a tear... reminded me soo much of my ex... i love the poem hun!

5/5

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I loved this poem because reading it, it brought back memories of my ex. This poem really brings out emotion. 5/5

~Chelsea

Omg wow this is awesome! I love it.It rocks.It's so emo :D

This was definately a twist between and love poem and a poem on suicide, lol. But I did like it. I liked the stanza....

"The future is now my fear
Why did you leave my dear??
You will never know, now that you are gone.
That in my heart, you were the only one."

It's so true...if you don't tell someone something immediately it seems that chance is gone forever.

Great job, keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

I love it
AWWW
i can relate
but i'm in love so hmf
_Chelsea*

This is really great. I've never been in love so i cannot relate. I love the ending!!! 10/10
~Lindsay

Omg! this is so sad....but i enjoyed it.. great write!

Like i said i LOVE it, it is sad but then again cute keep up the good work dont let it get to u though unless it already did

Ex cutter maybe? .... not that im dissen u i am ... if u look on my site i think i might has some poems about that

Is this like a true poem , cause i know if i was the girl u wrote this about i would see a whole lot of love i wouldnt wanna give up , this is really good and its cool u like to talk about ur feelings not all macho