The Lie

by Laybelled with a name   Dec 21, 2006


Come out of the dark,
And show your fear,
Coldness came ,
When you where near.

Share your story,
And spread pain,
Slowly breaking our minds,
And blackening our brains.

Make us cry,
Ruin our day,
Make everyone around you,
Go insane.

Why do you do this,
And break our hearts,
Make people that where together,
Rip slowly apart?

And now that your here,
And out of the dark,
You'll continue making us cry,
And breaking our hearts.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Wow i loved da emotion! it was so nice! keep up da great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    I LOVE your poem! i really like!!!!!!!!! sorry, but it's really amazing to me! 5/5 without a doubt. check my poems out too, they're the same style as this one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Im so jealous!! i love this poen with a passion! ur really good! 5/5!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    The emotion in this poem really touched me. Word choice had a great variety and i was really impressed.i figured i'd go ahead and point out you have where instead of we're in the 15th line. Flow was okay, could be a lil improved in the 2nd stanza. i also noticed some of the stanzas don't ryme.it still works though except i think it's important that you're last stanza rymes but thats just a thought. 4/5 lots of love, kayla

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