Not Where I Want to Be

by *Charisma*   Dec 21, 2006


(new style I tried called a triquatrain)

You are my fire, my soul's one desire.
Leaving me wanting more.
Wish I could find, the thoughts in your mind
Like rain, let them pour.
I feel such sweet peace, an inner release
When you are close to me
But it comes on so strong, then moves along
I'm not where I want to be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Short but sweet. u put a lot of goodness in such a short poem. keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is excellent. I admire those who can do the diffrent forms of poetry. This is done very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This is good....the rhyme and flow are perfect. 5/5

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