Aww this is really sad and it made me cry cause i can relate to this. wonderful job you did writing it. 5/5 keep up the great work!

~Kristina

That was really good sweetie. The title was eye-catching to me, and the first stanza got me really interested. I'm sure people can relate to this in their own way, through personal experiences, as i can. Another excellent poem. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Wow.. this is sad.. but its written beautifully .. nice job :)P

This is an amazing poem, great job! i love the beginning, it reminds me of one i wrote. i can totally relate to this, ur an amazing writer! 5/5!

Forever*Yours

This was really good, i found myself ondering what was wrong with her like she was here with me.

xxx alex xxx