Very good job! Excellent form! 5/5

Lol. For some reason I laughed when I read this. I kept imagining an animal talking and saying this. =] Wonderful job, completely random but wonderful all the same! 5/5 Keep it up.

Stephanie

Great job Rachel! You just keep surprising me with all this talent you posses. Wow! Great job!

I agree with Music♥Memories, what a random poem but words that probably so many hunted animals would say..
Well done on this format too =)
5/5
*Gem*

This is good! you did the style well! nice job!

Narc xxx