Brown-eyed girl

by Lindsay   Dec 21, 2006


Brown-eyed girl
forbidden love
feelings so deep
deeper than the ocean
love so strong
stronger than the strongest man
tears so subtle
like a butterfly
secret
shhh...don't tell

I Promise

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I'm over the whole thing that happened w/ isaac . . . his g/f needs to grow up . . . seriously.
    i miss my sweet tarts! i told anna that, and she's like "Chelsea, come on" she's not used to my sappiness yet i guess lol
    *C

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Lindsay
    hey babeh. . . cute poem. i can't stop thinking 'bout him. i picture him smiling and laughing. it's making me hurt inside, but it makes me feel wonderful that he can feel something other than sadness . . . unless it's a mask. :(
    love
    Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think that was a very interesting poem. It had a fantasy feel to it. I liked it....and I can't explain why. I'm not a fan of non-rhyming poems, but this one was so neat. I just loved it!
    Great job!
    Charisma*