This is awesome! very well laid out

Wow.. this was awesome! I loved it.. at the begining i thought it was going to be one of them cute sappy love poems, but it was awesome! * i have nothing against love poems by the way :D* i loved the ideas of this! you are so creative to come up with this! wonderful flow and energy throughout the whole piece.. the rhyming was a little iffy at times, but the strucutre, flow, and energy made up for it! ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! keep it up! :D *please write more. lol.. i wanna read another one by you! :D*