Living a dream

by Leanne   Dec 21, 2006


As he walks in the room
My heart skips a beat
His eyes meet mine
I feel so complete

I get the strangest feeling
A tingle down my spine
Funny how i feel this
Even though he isn't mine

He sits down beside me
Gives a little smile
That twinkle in his eye
Makes it all seem worthwhile

His touch is so gentle
As he puts his hands in mine
Whispers "How you feeling?"
I nod and say "I'm fine"

To others we look happy
I can see how it would seem
But secretly we both know
We're living in a dream.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow! This poem is really good and congrats on placing in the contest. I'm honored to be tied with this poem, it really was amazing. I love the phrasiology and the ending was wonderful! I could picture it all in my mind. Keep it up! :) 5/5 for sure!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Now.. I ABSOLUTLEY love this poem. It is just.. perfect. Really. It flowed very well. & I can relate to it. It was very beautiful. I have no critique at all. Beautifully penned.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    I can totally relate it! Amazing! I love this one! As I was reading I picture it all in my head realizing, I'm in the same situation...haha I love it!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Mysteroius. The flow in this one is also good. Cute poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Wow... that's really good, it's like amazing! ur a great writer! i can totally relate to this! 5/5!!

    *Shawte*

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