"As he walks in the room
My heart skips a beat
His eyes meet mine
I feel so complete"

An amazing opening and the rest of the poem is just as good.
Well done on your words, they are really heartfelt which adds to the emotion of the piece
Excellent
5/5
*Gem*

Oh Wow!
My favourite so far!
Especially the last stanza I thought that was really good.
xx

Wow... that's really good, it's like amazing! ur a great writer! i can totally relate to this! 5/5!!

*Shawte*

Mysteroius. The flow in this one is also good. Cute poem!

I can totally relate it! Amazing! I love this one! As I was reading I picture it all in my head realizing, I'm in the same situation...haha I love it!
5/5

Now.. I ABSOLUTLEY love this poem. It is just.. perfect. Really. It flowed very well. & I can relate to it. It was very beautiful. I have no critique at all. Beautifully penned.

Bri.x

Wow! This poem is really good and congrats on placing in the contest. I'm honored to be tied with this poem, it really was amazing. I love the phrasiology and the ending was wonderful! I could picture it all in my mind. Keep it up! :) 5/5 for sure!!!
~Midnight Sun