When The Deal Is Done.

by Lexie_cherryblossom1331   Dec 22, 2006


As far as it takes,
Are friendship will not break.
Know one can see,
The bond between you and me.
As far as it goes,
No one will know,
What it is has become,
When the deal is done.
But when the deal is done,
My friend, It only just begun.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    For a first poem it's written very well
    You kept up a nice steady flow and used some good words.
    So well done on this and keep writing!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by XxVivaLaSamxX

    That is a good poem you shud keep it up!
    ~samantha~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie_cherryblossom1331

    This is my first poem and it is not great, I misspelled one word, fas should be far. Sorry!
    ~lexie~

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