Comments : When The Deal Is Done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lexie_cherryblossom1331

    This is my first poem and it is not great, I misspelled one word, fas should be far. Sorry!
    ~lexie~

  • 17 years ago

    by XxVivaLaSamxX

    That is a good poem you shud keep it up!
    ~samantha~

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    For a first poem it's written very well
    You kept up a nice steady flow and used some good words.
    So well done on this and keep writing!
    5/5
    *Gem*