This is a beautiful one.
you were board but yet you have done a great job again. your words really inspired me. great wirte.

keep up the great work like always, and a 5/5 from me for sure as you really do deserve it.

That was cool. it made me smile, and i dont know how many poems make me smile, other than the ones most of my friends write. no matter how good a poem is i don't think i have ever felt a smile. but that was nice. ahah i got a laugh at the cutting the curls. so true. 5/5.

please check out mine when you have time, rate please.

I loved it, t reminded me of my younger sister over the years, she's 13 now but still seems like she's about 8 in my eyes.
Keep up the good work

Hey i really like this peom it is really different and a little off of what u usually do. i loved it 5/5.
love ya girlie! email me when you can

Well as im expecting a son in May, this poem had a special meaning i think it was just the right length the flow was impecuous 5/5

That was a cute poem... i liked the way you sort of repeated the the start in the ending... i do like to suggest taking of the last part where you said "i have no clue what this was..." because it kinda threw me off in the moment... just a suggestion though... i also think that if you had some time, you could extend the poem and make it deeper... either way that was a good poem... 5/5 for me...

~angel~

Wow this was excellent! i defiantly enjoyed reading this very much. it was a beautiful people on life. and it made me think of my friend cause she just had a baby girl =]. wonderful job on this! 5/5

~Kristina

That’s like really awesome honestly! I like how it flows almost so fast, and like I was put into a position like she was holding her own child and then was a grandmother all so fast, and it just circled life in a really twisty way! It was really enjoyabul! awesome job!

Wow, just wow. What a wonderful write. I loved it. You have a lot of talent. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Good flow, well done! 5/5