Awww. I know how this is. I've been in this position many times. No one loves me, and that's just the way life is. Well keep writing

Hayley-5/5

Nice poem, very greatly written.
keep it up

That's good! keep it up!

That's really good. I love it. Hey, i'm from New Mexico too. You should e-mail me at rangerette_08@hotmail.com

Keep writing, it's really good!!:)