Dreamland

by Lindzee   Dec 22, 2006


In my dreams there is you and me
Together through out my sleep
But when dawn approaches
We must part
Until darkness begins to creep

If only my dreamland were a another world
Where it was only us together
Then I would sleep
And in my dreams
I would be with you forever

Every time my heart beats
Its only for you my love
And in my dreamland
I only hold your hand
And long for only your love

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gentry

    LOLA! That was really good! I agree with *Gem* about the ending!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Every time my heart beats
    Its only for you my love
    And in my dreamland
    I only hold your hand
    And long for only your love"

    it was the ending that did it for me.
    Your words are lovely and the flow was consistent which is always a good thing
    Keep writing!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Drownin in My Own Tearz

    Cute c

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