Awww....lol well its a very very nice poem but i think u should add on to it....but anywayz...very good and it just makes me wnt to goo awwww.....and i can for bout a couple mins i think i told u lol well great poem

~*Jazzy~*

Wow so full of emotion

It's so sweet Jason I like it a lot like others have said its very romantic I rate it a 5/5

Laura

Sista i dont know much about love poems but this is good-well done
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Very touching poem...took my breath away. Great imagery, structure, word choice...until the end. I love you baby? Way to shoot down a beautiful bird in flight. Oh well.

That is beautiful!!! I wish a guy would write something like for me. Brought tears to my eyes...