Comments : The unemotional first time

  • 17 years ago

    by Katlyn

    Very deep, its good. Great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lets Rock

    Very nicely written

  • 17 years ago

    by Kiss Of Death09

    Made me hot

  • 17 years ago

    by steph pearl

    Wow i loved it, i have to say that it too made me all hot and bothered. that is a great poem once again!!!