This poem shows that you really care about your friend and you are a true friend who knows what friendships is based one. great message, i love it.
keep up the great work. 5/5 from me.

This is a lovely and heartfelt piece that was obviously inspired by someone special. Your honest simplicity is touching and it is clear you know and treasure true friendship.

This is a really good poem, it shows how you are feeling. a very touching poem well done.

If your feeling down,
your = you're

We can be are selfs around
are selfs = our selves

I didn`t really like how you broke it down on some stanzas . It kind of ruined the flow in my eyes, but shoving that all aside, it shows how you really care about yur friends. It`s a good message to send out.
..__MiNDYY

Radical! I hope you'll check out some of my poems sometime.

I really liked dis poem bsides da other one i read..and i can relate to this poem with me and my best friend or friends and it really made me think how much dey mean to me and i c how much dat person means to u as a friend 5/5 great jobb

Hey this was really good! even though,it didnt flow real well in some parts,i liked it. 5/5

This was so wonderfully written...this is how i feel about my best friend. i am always their for her..and shes their for me ...5/5 my favourite so far

I didn't like this one as well, but the emotions and potential it had were/ are outstanding.
Keep it up.

Heartfelt and well written. You did an excellent job on this one, I love the emtion.