The Faded Light

by awww   Dec 22, 2006


When you see her down and crying
Then you know the world is ending
Honestly, she\'s the last you\'d expect
To lose her mind and all respect

Everyone thinks she\'s happy and all that
Cause she's as loud as the nights\' cat
Talking, talking and never stopping
\'Til it comes to a point she\'s screaming

You\'ll be hearing her cold voice
It\'s getting annoying, it\'s just noise
She once spoke with sense and deepness
Now it\'s gone, just so meaningless

What happend to this girl everyone knew
The one who cared, said \"please & thank you\"
Well she\'s gone now, might not return
It\'s so painful after she crashed and burned

In the past, she may be loud but she was kind
Ready to listen to those who had troubled minds
Never turned away anyone who needed her to stay
She was like this every moment of each day

But something happend, she took the chance
Her heart was on the line for just one glance
Of pure joy and happiness just for herself
But no one caught her, she fell like a shelf

She hit the solid ground so hard, she broke
Shattering to tiny pieces, she suddenly awoke
The world isn\'t nice, that\'s the reality
It isn\'t filled with kindness or sincerity

She learned that the hard way, after falling
Torn into bits her heart was still beating
It was the first time that she was not whole
You can see it in her eyes, the door to her soul

Decided to leave the world, another takes her place
The total opposite of what she was, but the same face
For there was only one body, just a different spirit
The good girl was gone and what\'s left is the culprit

The culprit is alive with a new found mission
To stop people from having a good disposition
Filling herself with pain, hurt and sadness
She starts spreading the worlds\' hate and madness

A sad ending that we don\'t prefer
But what can we do, no one helped her
Even her friends said, \"leave her be\"
It hurts so much that this girl was me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    This is rediculas, your poems match up so perfectly to what my girlfriend would write it's weird how what you write sounds like her. Again magnificent

  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Aww if u can right as good as this im sure ur nothing like the poem describes, briliant poem tho

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    I loved this poem, it was really good, and well written i loved how you described everything and how it rhymed. it flowed well and you ended it perfectly.

    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow..
    I LOVED this.
    I thought it was excellently written.
    I loved the wording and imagery used, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and thought it flowed really well.
    My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought that was sad but powerful.
    An excellent write.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    It was a little bit hard to understand at first, but that became clearer later on. Some of the words sounded forced, which through it off track a little. However, apart from these, it was excellently penned. Interesting to read.

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