by awww Dec 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
When you see her down and crying |
by Zack O.o
This is rediculas, your poems match up so perfectly to what my girlfriend would write it's weird how what you write sounds like her. Again magnificent |
by LoreNz0
Aww if u can right as good as this im sure ur nothing like the poem describes, briliant poem tho |
by Oscar
I loved this poem, it was really good, and well written i loved how you described everything and how it rhymed. it flowed well and you ended it perfectly. |
by Jenni Marie
Oh wow.. |
It was a little bit hard to understand at first, but that became clearer later on. Some of the words sounded forced, which through it off track a little. However, apart from these, it was excellently penned. Interesting to read. |