Oh, another perfect poem by you. you have managed it so wonderful through out the poem, very well done. great job once again. i also loved your word choice, it is great.

another 5/5 from me, as you really deserve it.

Just saying that this poem is truely amzeing isnt enough. You caught me in your words. You know excalty how i feel and you expressed them through your thoughts so perfectly.

This poem is god. =D

-5*5-

I love this... thanks for writing! please feel better... it feels like u described me back when i was depressed- thank u!

Wow a very meaningful poem, heartfelt... the only thing was, the rhymes felt pushed... if you can't find something to rhyme, then just don't rhyme the poem, good poems don't always rhyme... so b/c it was forced the flow was a little off, but i still liked the poem, very dark, deep, but i think you could've gone deeper, pull your reader in more. nice job keep up the work

Your poem is very good! *runs around in cricles* very well writin, it brought a tear to my eye!!! *crying* *sobs* .....................................*still crying* :) hehehehehehehe oxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

It was a little bit hard to understand at first, but that became clearer later on. Some of the words sounded forced, which through it off track a little. However, apart from these, it was excellently penned. Interesting to read.

Oh wow..
I LOVED this.
I thought it was excellently written.
I loved the wording and imagery used, and I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and thought it flowed really well.
My favourite part was the last stanza, I thought that was sad but powerful.
An excellent write.

I loved this poem, it was really good, and well written i loved how you described everything and how it rhymed. it flowed well and you ended it perfectly.

good job

Aww if u can right as good as this im sure ur nothing like the poem describes, briliant poem tho

This is rediculas, your poems match up so perfectly to what my girlfriend would write it's weird how what you write sounds like her. Again magnificent