It was good, not one of your best poems though... it was just very repetitive, and like you said, it's old, so that's probably why. i still liked it though, i could relate, i know what that's like... nice job

Even if thats old its something im sure many can relate to.

and again i LOVELOVELOVE IT. you have talent.

Wow, a lot of emotion =( I can relate a lot to this... in a friendship sort of way... I cant really critique it because I feel like it came from your heart, and anything that does that is perfect in its own form. Great at getting your emotions out, awesome job!

Beautiful..
wonderfully written...
touching 5/5

love
amy

Aww very cute huni, well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

Omg very nice lyrics, Love them, 5/5, you should write more lyrics and post them this was good =)

Awww this was a great tune nice job!!

Very deep, good meaning, and I can deffinateally see it being a song, good work 5/5

We can relate! Awsome job. Sorry, i couldn't stop!

Awhhh this reminds me of someone and a situation im in right now. i loved it. great job!