Comments : Arms Open

  • 17 years ago

    by Unrequited

    While I'm not sure who this is about..... I liked it. A lot. I just hope that... you are happy.

    "Ya, I'll take you for how you are
    If you take me for who I am
    Black or white, wrong or right
    unsaved, shattered or unscathed
    Deaf or blind, angry or shy
    Whatever your ways, whatever your faith
    Or however the color of your sweet face
    My arms are open wide, come to me, I'll love you."

    Oh how that part gets to me... don't know who this is inteded for, but it gets to me...

    Wonderful poem, my Wolf!

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Damn... o.O I got tears in my eyes..cause I was just thinking about friendship and all that... -blush- Keep it up! *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Wow. I love it... so is this about God, or about society ? :) it's a good read. thanks 4 taking the time to write this. hows ur art doing? i cant find ne inspiration for art right now... but i do for poetry?

    oh yeah... can u plz read "a thousand things went right today"? it's really good... i guarantee you'll like it!

    Luv ya,
    Rain