My friends would know why i wrote this. We made some mistakes and now we realise the dangers of drinking. Not all the things in this poem actually happened but i realise how easy it is to actually happen. Those of you who decide to drink. Make wise choices and be so very careful. |
Great poem Em, it was written with heart, thought and passion. |
by RetroRavey
I love the poems that are dizzy-ing in their ways. This one makes me feel as if I'm spinning WAY out of control. Love it like all others. |
by RobinAnn13
Very fitting title. I liked the storyline but there were a few stanza's that didn't make complete sense. Still very realistic. The flow was good as well. <3 |